Academic Writing

Chapter 4
Online Commercial Advertisement

The online commercial advertisement is about the branded and well-known Puma and Paolo Nutini shoes. At the beginning of this advertisement, we can see a boy teenager singing with his band that plays some music instruments. Then a one girl appears suddenly towards the stage with an acrobatic action. The girl looks very energetic when she acts. After that, the girl line up in her own way. Honestly, I am impressed when saw her performance because the action seem too extreme to me. Other group of teenagers does the same action like the girl did before. There are a group of boys and girls with their sport casual gather together. Instead of an amazing action that I see, they wear a new pattern of Puma and Paolo Nutini shoes. In addition, the shoes are designed for indoor and outdoor activities. The teenager’s performance is such as an acrobatic action. At the end of the advertisement, all of them are line up together and they dismiss when the boy finishes his singing.